Thursday, March 11, 2010

The red tree

When Ms.Gonnerman read use the book Red Tree i felt that this book is about life of me and other people. Because this show when people feel like nobody understand you you are alone, like this. This book tells about the life like that. And i last this shows what is her red tree.
My red tree is computer because in computer, i can do lot of thing, go to internet and search other thing. It connect me and the world.
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  1. MichelleMarch 18, 2010 at 5:32 PM

    I think you need more description of your book. You shouldn't start sentence with 'because'. You have some grammar mistakes: 'it connects'. Also, I want to see more description of your red tree. It's too short.

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